Sunday, 27 November 2016

#WeWriWa WIP #paranormal

Time for another Weekend Writing Warriors. I'm giving a taste of another work in progress. This one is full of shifters. Here are my Sunday 8!

Shuddering, Rev ambled back toward the sidewalk, stumbling.
Derek caught her. He didn’t say anything, just held her close, his chin soft with longer than usual facial hair. Her body further betrayed her as a sob ripped through her chest. She buried her face into his throat and shook her head side to side.
Warm hands combed through her hair and rubbed her back. He made soothing sounds but didn’t say anything about deer, badgers, or mates. In control of herself again, she backed up to look into his dark eyes.
“Thank you.”

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14 comments:

  1. Oooooo! What did we miss? Lots of emotion here. A suggestion: the word "ambled" threw me with its implied ease. Maybe something stronger. Want to read more!

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  2. Oh, so very sweet and warm. Wonderful!

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  3. Sometimes nothing needs to be said. Great snippet!

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  4. Very intense, Angelica. An excellent hook that has me very intrigued.

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  5. Very intense, Angelica. An excellent hook that has me very intrigued.

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  6. Very sensual snippet with all that soft contact. Nice!

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  7. I like how you use so many sensory details.

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  8. Sometimes it is very comforting to have a pair of arms around you and a body to lean back on. Great snippet.

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  9. I like how you can sense she's trying to control her emotions and not quite succeeding. Very powerful snippet!

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  10. Emotional, but she tries to control it. I'm guessing that's how she deals with life.

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