Friday, 1 June 2012

Flash Fiction Friday: Magic Lost

It couldn’t be. It simply couldn’t be.
“Richard, wake up. Answer me.”
No fluttering eyelids, no rise and fall to his chest.
John clutched the naked body, leaning low over the familiar bare chest as a ragged sob tore through his throat.
“RICHARD!”
“John.”
His head spun to the female looking down on both their naked bodies.
“I told you I would give you what you deserve.”
“How? How did you do it?” John asked.
“The way I do everything, with all my heart.” Her words froze John’s blood. There was no anger, no vengeful satisfaction, just cold hard truth.

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Kendel Davi
Sherry Palmer
Sharita Lira writing as BLMorticia
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Lisa Worrall

10 comments:

  1. WOW, Angelica, that was powerful. And frightening. Terrific flash that begs "More!!":) xo

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  2. Excellent Plash, Angelica. I agree with Muffy. I'd love to know more.

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  3. Oh snap! What the hell did she do to him? Very suspenseful.

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  4. Talk about suspense. That's just infuriating. I have to know more. Great flasher

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  5. Cliffhanger!!! How sad he was gone. And what a bitch.

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  6. Oh wow...what the heck did she do...I want to know more..

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  7. Sent a chill down my spine, excellent!

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  8. Very nicely done. A lot of drama and tension there!

    Slira aka BLMorticia

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  9. So many questions . . . Nice tease.

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