Friday, 19 February 2016

Welcome Gentleman - #flashfiction flasher fiction friday #friday

I have something supernatural today. Wasn't quite sure who these ladies were or how they played but I didn't sense the usual seduction. I hope you like it. Don't forget to hop to the blog and read all the other 100 word flashes based on the same photo.

Daisy and Lisa push open the double doors.
“Gentlemen,” Daisy booms in a voice larger than her slender frame.
“Welcome,” Lisa finishes, her higher pitched voice lacking Daisy bombastic flair.
The room, with colorful walls and glittering chandelier is empty but for the cage on one side. The men gravitate toward it and the little girl locked inside.
Daisy and Lisa put their backs to one another again, closing the doors.
“Will it be enough?”
“Only one way to find out.”
The lock on the cage opens and a cloud of black smoke envelopes all but the woman in lingerie.


  1. Great use of describing the scene there. You painted it well enough to want to read more from there.

  2. You can't just leave us hanging, Angelica!! So does the little girl become the woman in lingerie?

  3. Oh wow!! Intense!! What happened?! Need more please!! lol Awesome flash!


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