Tuesday, 19 February 2013

#HDH Hump Day Hook - Slave

Today's Hook comes from the third of the Blue Moon House prequels. This is from Will's point of view. Remember, I'm not alone in this. Be sure to check out the other great hooks by visiting the blog.

“Will, stop.” It wasn’t Terrance but Sophia. Even after three years in their service, he was still becoming accustomed to his new masters. They could hear everything in the house and they were as fast as ghosts, appearing in one room and then another. He had learned quickly to do as they asked, when they asked, because they always knew if he didn’t. “Go back to your book.”

“No,” he said, not taking his eyes off the woman before him. “This is what you want, isn’t it, whore?” He stepped closer, squeezing her cheeks and deforming her mouth. “You want me to fuck you savagely while I tear out your hair, twist off your nipples.”

“William,” Sophia said again, an air of command.

“No, wait.” This time it was Nicholas. Were they all going to watch him? Not that he particularly cared, but it would increase the woman’s shame.

“Yes,” she said, tears leaking from her eyes. “Please, sir.”

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13 comments:

  1. Love your hooks. I don't think I've ever read another book like yours but you've tempted me with these hooks!

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  2. Usually I don't enjoy reading books like this...but I have to say, I enjoyed the hell out of this hook. Great job with the descriptors...I felt like I was there!

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  3. Interesting hook! I want to read more to figure out what's going on.

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  4. Ah, I love it. The subtle understanding between Dom and sub. Everyone else can think that lines have been crossed, but there's just an energy that's exchanged between the two that no one else can ever understand. Nice!

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  5. Interesting. Wonder what's going to happen next. :)

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  6. Definitely intrigued by the hook. When will the prequel be published/available? Inquiring minds want to know! Thank you.

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    1. I wish I could tell you. The first prequel, Kitten, is with the editor. This is the third prequel, so MAYBE end of this year? I'm not sure at all.

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  7. Yum! This sounds so interesting. Kinda like my vamps... except with BDSM. Ah, how I wish I could throw that in my series, but since the main character is only 16... Haha. Well, I just have to live out that fantasy by reading more of this!

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    1. Haha! Well, Sophia was probably only seventeen or eighteen when turned, but that was when girls married at fourteen. :D

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  8. Okay so now you have me wondering if he actually listens it follows through?

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  9. You always have the most interesting hooks! I want to linger around and watch what happens next. :)

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  10. Oooh, great hook, full of tension and emotion. You've got me wanting to read more.

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