Friday, 10 October 2014

Flasher Fiction Friday - The Look

Angela stopped, like the rest of her group of friends, to enjoy the tall, dark stranger standing on the beach. He was obviously looking for someone, and they all hoped one of them was it. He turned his gaze and caught the clutch of girls gawking. He flashed a brilliant white smile, all the brighter for his dark skin, which made the girls melt. All except Angela. There was something ominous in that smile. Something predatory. It was a power symbol, not a friendly one.

Perhaps because she wasn’t tittering like her friends, the man fixed his gaze on her.
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One picture, many stories. The blog has them all! 

7 comments:

  1. Nice take on this pic, Angelica :-)

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  2. Oh, I like the dark undertones to this flash. Nicely done :-)

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  3. Interesting tease with unanswered questions excellent

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  4. Oh no! I just have to know what happens next. Does he speak to Angela? Meet up with her. You can't keep us hanging like this. Fab flasher

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  5. Great cliffhanger, Angelica. Sometime, we don't want to stand out in a crowd. Very ominous, indeed. xo

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  6. Oh my! I hope she stays clear of him. Sounds like she can read emotions and intentions from people. Least keep her friends away from danger. Great flash!!

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  7. Dying to know... dying to know what happens when he greets her.

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