Monday, 24 September 2012

Tantalizing Tuesday - Jocelyn's limits

Remember to check out all the Tantalizing Tuesday Tales via the blog. Today I have an excerpt from Jocelyn's story, a prequel to Blue Moon House.

When Louis was brought to her room, it was to fuck her throat. Those were Will's exact words and Louis was obedient. Jocelyn had actually vomited, using her word as soon as the bile stopped spilling from her lips.

“Louis. Clean that,” Will ordered. The man jumped to do his master's bidding. Will stripped the soiled robe from Jocelyn and carried her to the kitchen, setting her on the table.

“Sorry,” she said with downcast eyes.

Will paused in wetting a soft cloth at the pump. He wrung it out and mopped at her chest with the cool damp rag.

“Nonsense. You have impressed me,” he told her, brushing her hair back. “I expected you to demand he stop after the first thrust. You have come a long way.” He rinsed out the cloth and filled a glass with the water for her to drink before using the cloth on the dirty streaks in her hair.

She drank greedily, trying to wash the burn from her throat.

Will took the glass and pulled it away. “Not too much. You'll upset your stomach again.” It flopped at that moment, agreeing with the Master.

“Yes, sir,” Jocelyn agreed, taking a sip.

“Better.”

7 comments:

  1. This was great, Angelica. We don't have enough writing out there with the use of safewords. Very good! Excellent writing and wonderful hints into the characters. I loved it.

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  2. Excellent. I would like to learn more about Will, Jocelyn and Louis. Great characters and a powerful story building with promise of obedience to a Master

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  3. I'm sorry, excellent writing but I'm not sure what lesson the master is trying to teach her here. I probably need to read more of the story. :)

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    1. Quite likely. She's learning to trust him and herself, but I don't think it was a 'lesson' unless it was 'how to deep throat.' Where's that on the curriculum guides, I ask you.

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  4. Excellent tease, although I was confused a bit. I realize the trust she is gaining for her master.

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  5. A perfect snippit of a slave learning to trust her Master. Quite evocative.

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  6. Holy smokes! Loved it!! Love master and slave stories. Hooe you continue this.

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