Monday, 3 September 2012

Tantalyzing Tuesday - Kimono

For all the other Tantalizing Tuesday Teasers, go here. And now, my pic:

Nabiki followed her sisters. Her kimono was plainer than theirs, her first real one. It had belonged to Yukiko and Sakura before her. They had each worn it proudly, as she did now.

“Here, Nabiki,” Yukiko said to her. “Enter this booth.” Sakura began giggling as soon as she and Yukiko had stopped.

“Why?” she asked, curious at their response.

“Because you’re a woman now.”

Trusting her sisters, Nabiki entered the booth, silk curtain falling behind her.

“Another of Genma’s daughters,” the man in the booth said. “Lovely as her sisters. Come here, child.”

He began easing her kimono open. At first Nabiki struggled, but the man put his mouth to her neck. Then she could smell his musk. Clouding her mind, he became more handsome, more alluring. She had only just begun enjoying touching herself, but after inhaling his scent, it seemed all her skin prickled and tingled. Every brush of his fingers sent her awareness further from the festival to focus on his mouth, his fingers, the rod prodding her thigh. She was naive to that, but in that moment, knew what she wanted to do with it, knew instinctively where it should go.

“Yes, child. That’s it.”


  1. excellently written an beautifully described loss of innocence loved it

  2. Wonderful imagery, Angelica. I can almost see it, can almost smell the musk of the stranger. Excellent tease!

  3. Wow! What a wicked tease!
    Angelica, you've outdone yourself with this one. Thumbs up!

  4. Hot post, loved it and the picture is beautiful!

  5. whew! I felt like I was sitting there with her. Great imagery and description.

  6. What a wonderfully written piece! You had me walking with her and once we entered the :)

  7. I never thought the festival would happen that way. Great dialogue and description.

  8. Excellent imagery. I love your teaser

  9. So this was her moment to be deflowered. That was a beautiful read. Her sister set her up though, ‘cause she didn’t know what she was walking into. Stunning flash though.

    1. Oh, yes, she was totally set up. What are big sisters for, right? *eye roll*


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