Thursday, 23 May 2013

#FFF Flasher Fiction Friday - Enough


“This just isn’t good enough,” he said for the sixth time. “I’ve seen what you’re capable of, Sharon, and this falls short.”
He reached out to her notepad and crumpled the paper, her ideas crushed into his fist like the ones before. Another ball still sat on his desk from the previous meeting.
Nothing was good enough for him. She’d learned that the short while they had dated. She was never mysterious enough, never open enough, as though those didn’t contradict.
“Get yourself a new slave, Patrick.” She picked up a ball and shoved it into his mouth. “I quit.”

Now go read the other flashes on the blog.

4 comments:

  1. Now there's a woman not afraid to say what she thinks. Great flasher

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  2. My sentiments exactly. Good for her. The stupid bastard.

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  3. Loved this one, great flash!

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  4. Nice!! I loved how she put it to him. ;-) He def ate her words, she has potential and I wonder what she does now. Great flash!

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