Friday, 6 February 2015

Dive in - Flasher Fiction Friday and Word Count Podcast


The place looks like crap. There were two exceptions to that: damn good whiskey and this musician.
Approaching the instrument as most men approach a woman, he brushes his hand over the wood, folding back the cover on the keys. He caresses the ivory in several positions, adjusting himself, lining up perfectly. And then…
The room freezes. Most are drunk, but no one speaks. Tonight, he makes her moan, a rumble that settles into your gut, taking your soul into the gutter.

I’ve never been in love with another man before, but this one can sing my pants right off.

This is just one interpretation of the picture. There are more on the Blog. Also, if you are interested in listening to a slightly longer version of this piece, I've submitted it to the Word Count Podcast. It's a great little show and I encourage all my writer friends to join in!

3 comments:

  1. THAT was spectacular! Man, I could feel it in my belly--deep. That rumble you described. What a fabulous flash, very erotic and seductive. Great pace, tempo and crescendo. Ba-Da-Bing. Got me!! xo

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  2. The power of music right there. Great Flash :-)

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  3. Fabulous flash Angelica! The descriptions brought it to life and never judge a book by it's cover or so it's said. Inside this building is a man who creates powerful music. I could almost hear it. Excellently written x

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