Thursday, 21 March 2013

#FFF Flasher Fiction Friday - What do you say to the Parents?

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She closed her eyes and swallowed. A firm hand took hold of hers, squeezing it, and she followed. There was no change in temperature, or humidity, or pressure, just across the parking lot.

“Open them,” he told her, taking both her hands in his.

Gasping, she stared at the spiral runes and stone columns amid the clouds.

“Where are we?” she asked, stepping closer to him. Would she fall back to earth if he didn’t keep her afloat?

“Home,” he said with a smile. “Don’t worry, my parents will love you every bit as much as I do.”

“Your parents?”

4 comments:

  1. This flash is completely mysterious. It's filled me with curiosity and nerves. Intriguing, Angelica.

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  2. Oh, I love this. So sweet :-)

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  3. Mysterious. Is he a supernatural being? I am very intrigued, especially with the narrative "Would she fall back to earth if he didn't keep her afloat?"

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  4. Mysterious.Had he parents been kept a secret because of coming from another world I wonder. I love it. You interpreted the picture perfectly

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